Classroom Musings V
I was recently going through a magazine article regarding the plight of the Godhra riots survivors and the apathy they are still facing in the hands of the administration and society (more so in case of minorities).
Here's my tribute to those who have lost everything in the carnage. Again written in one of those classes where I turn schizophorenic sometimes and break away from the mundane realities of boredom. It comes a little late but nevertheless....
Here's my tribute to those who have lost everything in the carnage. Again written in one of those classes where I turn schizophorenic sometimes and break away from the mundane realities of boredom. It comes a little late but nevertheless....
Revisiting Godhra
Walking down the good old lane ,
where I'd been before.
Looking at the black brick house,
standing naked like a whore.
I see no life no aged soul,
for they've all been muted.
The silence colours the courtyard grey ,
all the laughter seems diluted.
Whose fault was it I would not know,
their eyes all seem so pale.
The happiness, the joy are gone things now,
a blanket of gloom prevails.
The air seems heavy with dried up tears,
all I breathe is agony.
Whoever broke that little girl's toy,
will he ever pay for his felony?
Looking at the black brick house,
standing naked like a whore.
I see no life no aged soul,
for they've all been muted.
The silence colours the courtyard grey ,
all the laughter seems diluted.
Whose fault was it I would not know,
their eyes all seem so pale.
The happiness, the joy are gone things now,
a blanket of gloom prevails.
The air seems heavy with dried up tears,
all I breathe is agony.
Whoever broke that little girl's toy,
will he ever pay for his felony?
Comments
all d bst !!
keep writing n keep smiling :-)
Tks :)
@doll
is :( for 'too bad' or 'too sad'?
gud one though!!keep at it..
btw--wat is this whole 'tagging ' thing?? wat am i supposed to write abt??anything i want??
The poetry is a powerful one! Well expressed and a real Masterpiece
GBU
Arti
will he ever pay for his felony?
heartfelt
doll
@smitha
@death
@manish
Thx...thx..:)Glad that atleast sumbody likes my poetry.
@doll
tks for the criticism doll. Will try to improve :)
"The silence colours the courtyard grey"
"The air seems heavy with dried up tears,
all I breathe is agony."..in fact every line is heartbreakingly sad..
incredibly expressd thru words..